Okay so I did some editing to part A, I have never used Google docs but I just hit share when I was done. Please let me know that you got it and what you think. I saved it on my computer just in case.
I tried to organize it by the bullet points in the instructions given for the assignment to make sure we covered each one in detail. I used pretty much everything in your original document but rearranged some of it to fit the criteria.
The only thing I took out pretty much completely was the parts about hand-made tools, and hoses and what not. They are from a part of Africa that has access to internet, so the chances of them being a more developed part of the region is pretty high. They may have access to a lot of the same tools we do, so I figured it was better to leave that part out and leave it more open to what the kids could discover with each other.
I am about to work on the map, should have it to you either tonight or sometime tomorrow (hopefully before 4pm) depending on how long it takes. I figured I would try to look up a path that a shipment would go to get to the place in Africa the other class and use that for our map. That is if that is possible. Otherwise I guess I'll just make one up?
So I ended up doing a little more editing to part A because when I went to look for shipping to Nigeria instead of being able to find paths I found prices and it seemed really expensive, so I wanted to add that part in that if it wasn't possible there was another option. So for the map I did traveling from Kalamazoo to Lagos, Nigeria which is where the airport is and I included the distances. You should both receive the map in your e-mails. Once again, let me know if you got it (should be sent to both of your gmail accounts) what you think of everything, and what changes you think should be made.
ReplyDeleteThe map looks like I was thinking also. I looked at Part A and it looks good. If you can post the map to the blog, I will post Part A. (after we hear from Katie.) If we don't hear from her by Saturday...we might just have to post them both. Your opinion??
ReplyDeleteI saw the original part A a few days ago and I just read the changes that were made to part A. I think that it sounds very professional and I also like the map. So, feel free to post both parts.
ReplyDeleteSounds good to me! I'll take care of the map part today and whenever you can post part A we should be all set!
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